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Monday, November 1, 2010

Poetry #1: Forbidden Love



You always make me happy
Whenever you smile and say "Hello!" to me
And there is something I feel inside me
Whenever you glance and move close to me

I love to be with you everyday
I hate it when you started to walk away
I want you to just stay
Stay right here next to me

I don't want to lose you someday
So I'm wondering how can I make you stay?
Because everytime you are not around
It keeps me feeling down

I know you won't believe me
That you mean so much to me
And now as time goes by
I fear of hearing you say "Goodbye"

But if this would be the last
I don't want to waste a single second
'Cause I know I can't bring back the past
And I hope through this poem you will understand

That I like you, I want you
I love you that's why I need you
And I'm hoping and wishing
That you would let me show this feeling
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14 comments:

  1. love your new page.
    beautiful love poem.

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  2. Have fun,
    it is your 2nd time,
    you may wish to visit 12 participants,
    and half a dozen fresh poets to explore.
    let me know after you are done.

    Happy Thursday!

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  3. Kumiko- Thank you dea. ^^,
    Jingle- already visited a lot of fresh poems awhile ago. lol

    Can you follow this poem? hehe so I gain more followers. Thank you ^^,

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  4. Enjoyable read! The page looks rather tempting and interesting to look at! Good luck with your writing!

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  5. Think I commented on your last poem by mistake lol!!
    This is cute, with great feeling coming across - well done!

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2010/10/29/i-want-chocolate/

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  6. Vry simply stated and created a beautiful and powerful rhythm. Very nice. thanks for sharing...

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
    Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com

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  7. nice writing, Chamie.. lovely rhythm in it :) the page looks really good too..

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  8. Nice blog and wonderful poem :)

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  9. What a wonderful poem...I'm a sucker for forbidden love!

    Enjoy the Rally!

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  10. Just say how you feel, say it directly to him. Maybe that will make him stay. If he doesn't, at least you were honest and you gave love a chance. I think that whenever one follows one's heart, there will be no regrets in the long run. But then again, I'm a hopeless romantic, so maybe my words are silly. ;) In any case, I enjoyed reading your very romantic, heartfelt poem.

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  11. these are some sincere emotions.... and not too over the top as well... simple and to the point is like the easy way to express how one feels....

    I liked it..

    .Mase Da Rula.
    A Ruler's Kingdom
    http://dieselfromthad.wordpress.com

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