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Wednesday, December 22, 2010

Poetry #14: IMY Part 2



We were inlove for more than 2 years
I looked back and saw our memories
I can still remember,
How loving and happy we were

We used to stay late at night
Just talking, kissing, and hugging tight
We had downfalls and sad moments
But our 2 years were filled with so much happy sentiments

I can still remember your sweetest smile
Your exceptional way of looking me in the eyes
I can still remember how we fell for each other
And now, I miss the old times we were together


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17 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 22, 2010 at 12:36 PM

    cute image,
    love the sweetness in your words.
    what a smiling entry.

    Merry Christmas!

    A+++

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  2. eyeographyDecember 22, 2010 at 8:46 PM

    The picture is soooooo cute...
    Deep sentiments behind your poem...
    Lovely work :)

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  3. AnonymousDecember 23, 2010 at 8:34 AM

    revive it! nice poem! mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/23/painted-hallways/

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  4. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallDecember 27, 2010 at 5:35 PM

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    you can share this again on week 16.

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  5. AnonymousDecember 29, 2010 at 4:21 AM

    Hello, thanks for visiting! Haha :D Would you like to follow each others blogs? :) Happy New Year!

    Btw, you're a Filipino too? Hehe. Saan ka nakatira? :D

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 3, 2011 at 9:10 PM

    Deeply felt the emotions conveyed...a beautifully written piece. Thank you for sharing.

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 4, 2011 at 7:00 AM

    i found this sad. i don't know. i got this feeling that perhaps it's only the memories you have left or something.

    anyway, the piece speaks to me more honestly than i can to myself. thank you for the soft unknowing nudge.

    -KYOGAKURA

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  8. JingleJanuary 4, 2011 at 8:30 AM

    welcome in,
    Glad to have you.

    kind of sad, the longing is obvious, yet well delivered message.

    Happy Rally.

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 4, 2011 at 6:11 PM

    Oh, the pain of jilted lovers... nothing makes more emotional poetry!

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  10. LolamouseJanuary 4, 2011 at 7:27 PM

    so sad. thanks for sharing.

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 4, 2011 at 11:13 PM

    nice and romantic.. mines here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/14/hunger/

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  12. gracefulgliderJanuary 5, 2011 at 4:34 AM

    aaaawww.... i have couple of questions... but ....

    Thanks for sharing Chamz... this is deep.

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  13. PurviJanuary 6, 2011 at 12:41 PM

    This is just so cute and touching.. love truly has no boundations!

    ~ http://puplumages.wordpress.com/2010/12/29/sunshine-on-my-shoulder/

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  14. AnonymousJanuary 8, 2011 at 11:46 AM

    I love how you used "inlove" as one word. That says so much more than even the two words side by side!

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  15. lizziviggiJanuary 8, 2011 at 2:20 PM

    So poignant-- you show us well how much you miss somebody.

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  16. SherryJanuary 10, 2011 at 9:47 AM

    You wear your heart on your sleeve. Your work is charming. Perhaps you should add an "R" to your name :-)

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  17. AnonymousJanuary 13, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    congrats on your perfect poet award wk 36.. here’s mine for this thursday again haha.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/02/19/the-tears/

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