You’re so unkind
After all I did, you don’t even mind?
How could you do such thing?
You’re so mean
Look into my eyes
So that you’ll realize
I expect you to say something
Just give me a sign, say anything
You used me since
I hate you then
I gave you my all
But you didn’t bother at all
I got some problems
But I can solve them
You’re one of them
But you’re the one I can’t mend
Give me a reason
Why you can’t learn from your lesson?
You’re not like this before
Now I don’t know you anymore
All these misunderstandings, I’ve been sick
You changed and I don’t understand
Hence, I’m still here to lend you my helping hand
Even if we still do have conflict
Written in the year 2005
Chamz, I feel the pain of misunderstanding and a troubled relationship. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMisunderstandings can be difficult ... writing about them sometimes helps, doesn't it?
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Relationships can be difficult even at best. People change. But hold out the hand to help is always kind and human.
ReplyDeleteNice work ...
Poem on ...
nice work... i totally can relate to a messed relationship.
ReplyDeletecheck out my poem... ' that I love you'
emo? broken? feeling lost and unwanted? Magsadya lamang sa tanggapan ni keko para sa mainam na payo.
ReplyDeleteJoke :)
umeenglish. Medyo mahirap ang relasyon pero wala namang nagsabi na kailangan palaging masaya hindi ba? hihi
Hi Chamz.... Thanks for visiting my blog
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You're so talented! Keep it up!
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