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Wednesday, March 9, 2011

Poetry #18: Which Way


Tell me where do I go
Which way would I take
Lead me to my next step
Because I don't know where to

I have been striving really hard
Gave my best shot
Did everything even if I tear apart
Please give me more strength, dear God

I am about to give up
I am losing hope
Sooner or later, I might stop
Please help me to be able to cope


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8 comments:

  1. I can relate to this poem, right now...I can consider myself lost.

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  2. hehe before anythinh else, asses urself first...where are you now?

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  3. love it,

    very fun word play and wondrous mindset.

    A++

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  4. you will cope and sail thru my friend- when god puts you to it, he will pull you thru it.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/04/27/cheesecake/

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  5. This is sad, heartfelt, and raw in its honesty. Hope you'll find your way!

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  6. Incredibly authentic. We all have these mements. Just crying out is the beginning of healing. Hang tough ... Poem on ...

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