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Wednesday, November 3, 2010

Poetry #10: Love Still

Come a little closer
I miss us being together
Please don't walk away,
Tell me if you feel the same way

Remember those words we exchanged
So sweet and loving
I wish you didn't change
And didn't leave me here hanging

Tell me if you still love me
Tell me if I still have a place


  1. The structure of this is wonderful. Very interesting ending on two lines after two stanzas of five. Really gives some character to the importance of the last lines.

  2. thank you for the compliment dear. ^^,

  3. Welcome to Room for Romance.. This is truly romantic and I wish him to have the same place in her heart.. I will consider this for Romantic Room as well..

    --Someone Is Special--

  4. ah poetic heartache - beautiful and tragic

  5. I think that love is like cannot be destroyed it merely changes form, but it is sad when it changes for one and not the other. Peace be with you.

  6. Ah, that's really cute, and quite moving!
    'still have a place' is just right.

  7. so romantic,
    I thought I already commented here.
    awesome entry.


    week 33 perfect poet award notice,
    Happy Saturday!
    If you wish to accept, attach a poem, enter for week 33..
    you can do it later if too busy.
    Thanks for the support.


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