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Monday, November 22, 2010

Poetry #12: IMY


It's been a year
Still I'm wishing you're here
It's been a long time
Since you used to be mine

Hope you're happy now
For I am trying to be, somehow
Even though sometimes I miss you
And I wish those memories to undo

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8 comments:

  1. This is really beautiful. You remind me of the relationship I was in a year ago. It ended about a year and a month ago after two years. I am now back in a relationship with a new wonderful person, but i often find myself looking back as your poem is. Excellent portrayal of emotion.

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  2. Too good dude :) it hsppens in my life..enjoyed :)

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  3. Sweet stuff! Nice. Thanks for your visit too

    Warmest Salad

    Luke @ WordSalad

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  4. Oh kind of sad but well written. I hope you find happiness and mend

    Wysteria

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  5. End of The Year Awards 4 Friends of Jingle or Jingle Poetry Community

    Merry Christmas and Happy New Year! xxx

    keep up the excellence,

    link up to 3 poems to our potluck tomorrow, give us the cheers to continue...

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